A common weakness in writing is the lack of
varied sentences. Becoming aware of three general types of sentences--simple,
compound, and complex--can help you vary the sentences in your writing.
The most effective writing uses a variety of the
sentence types explained below.
1. Simple sentences
A simple sentence has the most
basic elements that make it a sentence: a subject, a verb, and a completed
thought.
Examples of simple sentences include
the following:
1.
Joe waited for the train.
"Joe" = subject, "waited" = verb
"Joe" = subject, "waited" = verb
2.
The train was late.
"The train" = subject, "was" = verb
"The train" = subject, "was" = verb
3.
Mary and Samantha took the bus.
"Mary and Samantha" = compound subject, "took" = verb
"Mary and Samantha" = compound subject, "took" = verb
4.
I looked for Mary and Samantha at the bus station.
"I" = subject, "looked" = verb
"I" = subject, "looked" = verb
5.
Mary and Samantha arrived at the bus station early but waited
until noon for the bus.
"Mary and Samantha" = compound subject, "arrived" and "waited" = compound verb
"Mary and Samantha" = compound subject, "arrived" and "waited" = compound verb
Tip: If you use many simple sentences in an essay,
you should consider revising some of the sentences into compound or complex
sentences (explained below).
The use of compound subjects, compound
verbs, prepositional phrases (such as "at the bus station"), and
other elements help lengthen simple sentences, but simple sentences often are
short. The use of too many simple sentences can make writing "choppy"
and can prevent the writing from flowing smoothly.
A simple sentence can also be referred to as
an independent clause. It is referred to as "independent"
because, while it might be part of a compound or complex sentence, it can also
stand by itself as a complete sentence.
2. Compound sentence
A compound sentence refers to a
sentence made up of two independent clauses (or complete sentences) connected
to one another with a coordinating conjunction. Coordinating
conjunctions are easy to remember if you think of the words "FAN
BOYS":
§ For
§ And
§ Nor
§ But
§ Or
§ Yet
§ So
Examples of compound sentences include
the following:
1.
Joe waited for the train, but the train was late.
2.
I looked for Mary and Samantha at the bus station, but they
arrived at the station before noon and left on the bus before I arrived.
3.
Mary and Samantha arrived at the bus station before noon, and they
left on the bus before I arrived.
4.
Mary and Samantha left on the bus before I arrived, so I
did not see them at the bus station.
Tip: If you rely heavily on compound sentences in
an essay, you should consider revising some of them into complex sentences
(explained below).
Coordinating conjunctions are useful for
connecting sentences, but compound sentences often are overused. While
coordinating conjunctions can indicate some type of relationship between the
two independent clauses in the sentence, they sometimes do not indicate much of
a relationship. The word "and," for example, only adds one
independent clause to another, without indicating how the two parts of a
sentence are logically related. Too many compound sentences that use
"and" can weaken writing.
Clearer and more specific relationships can be
established through the use of complex sentences.
3. Complex sentence
A complex sentence is made up
of an independent clause and one or more dependent clauses connected
to it. A dependent clause is similar to an independent clause, or complete
sentence, but it lacks one of the elements that would make it a complete
sentence.
Examples of dependent clauses include
the following:
§ because Mary and Samantha arrived at the bus
station before noon
§ while he waited at the train station
§ after they left on the bus
Dependent clauses such as those above cannot stand
alone as a sentence, but they can be added to an independent clause to form a
complex sentence.
Dependent clauses begin with subordinating
conjunctions. Below are some of the most common subordinating conjunctions:
§ after
§ although
§ as
§ because
§ before
§ even though
§ if
§ since
§ though
§ unless
§ until
§ when
§ whenever
§ whereas
§ wherever
§ while
A complex sentence joins an independent clause
with one or more dependent clauses.
The dependent clauses can go first in the
sentence, followed by the independent clause, as in the following:
Tip: When the dependent clause comes first, a comma
should be used to separate the two clauses.
1.
Because Mary and Samantha arrived at the bus station before noon,
I did not see them at the station.
2.
While he waited at the train station, Joe realized that the train
was late.
3.
After they left on the bus, Mary and Samantha realized that Joe
was waiting at the train station.
Conversely, the independent clauses can go first
in the sentence, followed by the dependent clause, as in the following:
Tip: When the independent clause comes first, a
comma should not be used to separate the two clauses.
1.
I did not see them at the station because Mary and Samantha
arrived at the bus station before noon.
2.
Joe realized that the train was late while he waited at the train
station.
3.
Mary and Samantha realized that Joe was waiting at the train
station after they left on the bus.
Complex sentences are often more effective than
compound sentences because a complex sentence indicates clearer and more
specific relationships between the main parts of the sentence. The word
"before," for instance, tells readers that one thing occurs before
another. A word such as "although" conveys a more complex
relationship than a word such as "and" conveys.
The
term periodic sentence is used to refer to a complex sentence
beginning with a dependent clause and ending with an independent clause, as in
"While he waited at the train station, Joe realized that the train was
late."
Periodic sentences can be especially effective because the completed thought occurs at the end of it, so the first part of the sentence can build up to the meaning that comes at the end.
Periodic sentences can be especially effective because the completed thought occurs at the end of it, so the first part of the sentence can build up to the meaning that comes at the end.
Beginning sentences with: "and" or "because"
Should you begin a sentence with "and"
or "but" (or one of the other coordinating conjunctions)?
The short answer is "no." You should
avoid beginning a sentence with "and," "or,"
"but," or the other coordinating conjunctions. These words generally
are used to join together parts of a sentence, not to begin a new sentence.
However, such sentences can be used effectively.
Because sentences beginning with these words stand out, they are sometimes used
for emphasis. If you use sentences beginning with one of the coordinating
conjunctions, you should use these sentences sparingly and carefully.
Should you begin a sentence with
"because"?
There is nothing wrong with beginning a sentence
with "because."
Perhaps some students are told not to begin a
sentence with "because" to avoid sentence fragments (something like
"Because Mary and Samantha arrived at the bus station before noon" is
a sentence fragment), but it is perfectly acceptable to begin a sentence with
"because" as long as the sentence is complete (as in "Because
Mary and Samantha arrived at the bus station before noon, I did not see them at
the station.")
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